A Conversation with Machiavelli · Pair 6 of 39
Editor's summary Machiavelli holds that Rome could not have been ordered without the enmities of people and senate if it was to grow great: a numerous, armed people made both its empire and its tumults, a necessary inconvenience. Guicciardini believes that a Rome which used its plebs in war had to keep them content, and that the patricians caused the tumults by neither admitting the plebs to government nor stopping the injuries that made them want it; without the distinction of orders, or with honours shared from the start, there would have been no such tumults. He does not see that Rome could not have been ordered without them; rather, he judges it very easy, and since it could be done, Rome's defects cannot be praised, nor the tribunes, more harmful than useful once peace came.
Se in Roma si poteva ordinare uno Stato che togliesse via le inimicizie tra il Popolo e il Senato.
Whether in Rome a state could be ordered that should take away the enmities between the people and the senate.
Argument. The question follows from I.4 and I.5. Machiavelli has argued that the controversies between people and senate kept Rome free; now he grants that they ran on to the Gracchi and ruined free living, and asks whether Rome could have had its greatness without them. The method is comparative: find the republics that were long free without such enmities, see what their state was, and ask whether it could have been brought to Rome.
Cross-reference. "Discoursed above" points to I.4 (I.4 .01), where the tumults are defended, and to I.5, where the guard of liberty is placed in the plebs (I.5 .04).
Argument. Venice first. Its form was given by chance more than by prudence: the first settlers, once numerous enough to need laws, ordered a government and closed it to later comers, and the names gentlemen and commoners came afterwards. It stayed quiet because no one already there was excluded, and those who came later had neither cause (nothing was taken from them) nor convenience (they were kept from any office that carried authority), and were never many enough to outnumber the governors.
History. The closing Machiavelli describes is the Serrata of the Great Council, begun in 1297 and completed by stages into the 1320s, which made membership hereditary in the families admitted; the "gentlemen" are the patricians inscribed in it. It did not admit everyone then living in Venice, as Machiavelli's account has it.
Cross-reference. Venice settled on its rocks "for the causes stated above": the flight from barbarian invasion in I.1 (I.1 .03).
Argument. Sparta second. A king and a narrow senate held it united because there were few inhabitants, strangers were kept out, and Lycurgus' laws made Sparta more equal in wealth and less equal in rank, so that the plebs, poor among the poor, did not covet the offices. The kings, set between the nobility and the people, protected the plebs from injury to secure their own dignity, and a plebs that did not fear did not desire rule. Two things, then: few citizens, and no strangers.
History. The "narrow senate" is the gerousia, twenty-eight elders with the two kings. Sparta granted citizenship to outsiders almost never; its citizen body shrank over the classical period, which bears on the "weak foundation" Machiavelli finds in it (.05).
Argument. The conclusion is reached by consequence. To be quiet like these republics Rome had either to keep the plebs out of war, as Venice did, or keep strangers out, as Sparta did; it did neither, and the plebs grew in force and in occasions of tumult. Had Rome been quieter, it would have been weaker, its path to greatness cut. The cause of the tumults and the cause of expansion were the same cause. Then the general rule: no inconvenience is removed without another arising, so a people armed for empire cannot be handled as you please, and a people kept small or unarmed cannot hold what it takes, or grows so base that you are anyone's prey. Choose the course with fewer inconveniences; nothing is wholly clean.
Cross-reference. Guicciardini grants the premise that Rome needed its plebs in arms, and reframes it in his opening clause: having armed them, Rome had to keep them content Guicciardini .01, and denies the conclusion: the tumults came from the patricians' refusal to share, not from the arms.
Argument. Rome could have copied Sparta's king for life and small senate, but not its small citizen body, and so the copy would have done little for union. Whoever founds a republic must first choose: expansion, and then order it like Rome and accept the tumults; or narrow bounds, and then order it like Sparta or Venice and forbid it to acquire, because acquisitions on a weak foundation ruin it. Sparta and Venice both expanded and both fell at a touch.
History. Sparta's hegemony after the Peloponnesian War broke when Thebes, freed by Pelopidas in 379 BC, defeated it at Leuctra in 371. Venice's mainland empire, built through the fifteenth century, collapsed after Agnadello (14 May 1509), when the French army of the League of Cambrai routed its own in a single day; Venice recovered most of its mainland by 1517; Machiavelli calls it "one battle", as in Principe 12.
Cross-reference. The choice between a republic that would "make an empire" and one content to maintain itself restates I.5's verdict (I.5 .04), which promised that "the following chapter" would give the causes.
Argument. The ideal, granted and withdrawn. He would believe the best lasting republic one ordered within like Sparta or Venice, set in a strong place, strong enough to deter attack and not so great as to frighten its neighbours, war is made on a republic to master it or for fear of it, and such a republic almost wholly removes both motives; the more so if a law forbade it to expand. That would be "the true political living". But human things move; necessity drives where reason does not; a republic built not to expand, if forced to, loses its foundations, and one left in peace goes soft or divides. Since, as he believes, the balance cannot be held, the founder must choose the more honourable part, and order the republic so that it can keep what necessity makes it take.
Cross-reference. Idleness that makes a city effeminate or divided is the danger I.1 assigns to fertile sites (I.1 .06).
Argument. Back to the question: he believes the Roman order must be followed, since he does not believe a middle way can be found, and tolerate the enmities as the inconvenience necessary to Roman greatness. He adds the tribunes once more: besides guarding liberty, the authority of accusing, which the tribunes among others held, benefits republics; that is the subject of the next chapter.
Cross-reference. Guicciardini answers this sentence with his last: the tribunes, once the city was pacified, "rather damaging than useful" Guicciardini .01.
Established from the 1824 edition (WIT-NM-DISC-1824-IA), page-image-backed, which governs. Collated against the 1554 Giglio printing, Venice (WIT-NM-DISC-1554-IA), which is comparison evidence only.
Paragraph divisions are editorial. The witness prints the chapter as one unbroken block.
le controversie tra il Popolo ed il Senato ... dette controversie — 1824. The 1554 witness reads le contese tra il popolo, & il Senato ... dette contese. Contests for controversies, both times; the rubric's inimicizie stands in both.
non sono stati molti, e di tanto numero che vi sia disproporzione — 1824. The 1554 witness reads non sono stati molti, et di tanto numero, che ui sia disproportione. Both witnesses print e, where the sense wants the negative carried on: 'not many, nor of such a number'. It construes so, and the English carries the negative (D129).
il che dette alla Plebe forza ed augumento — 1824. The 1554 witness reads ilche dette alla Plebe forza, & accrescimento. Giglio's accrescimento is the noun of accrescere (increase), which D69 keeps apart from the 1824 augumento (augmentation).
E loro fecero l'una e l'altra ... non lo puoi dopo maneggiare — 1824. The 1554 witness reads & eglino fecero l'una & l'altra ... non lo puoi poi maneggiare. Same sense.
con danari e con industria ... fusse il miglior modo — 1824. The 1554 witness reads con danari, & con astutia ... fusse il modo. Giglio's Venice conquers by cunning, the 1824 Venice by industry; Giglio has no miglior.
se e' fusse in lei constituzione o legge ... t'induce la necessità ... a farla rovinare più presto ... quando pure la necessità — 1824. The 1554 witness reads se e fusse in lei ordine, o legge ... ti astringe la necessita ... a farla rouinar con piu prestezza ... quando la necessita. Order for constitution; necessity constrains rather than induces, so that Giglio loses the 1824 repetition non t'induce, t'induce.
tollerarle ... l'autorità tribunizia — 1824. The 1554 witness reads si deurebbe tollerarle ... l'auttorita de Tribuni. Giglio supplies the modal the 1824 infinitive leaves to credo che sia necessario: 'one should tolerate them'.
Orthography, capitalization, word division and punctuation follow the governing witness throughout; no reading is hybridized between witnesses.
Noi abbiamo discorsi di sopra. "We have discoursed above": the first of the chapter's currere verbs (D01). It ends on the same verb, si discorrerà, "will be discoursed"; between them ricorrere, "have recourse" (.01), and non occorrerà mai, "it will never occur" (.06). Machiavelli's discoursing frames the chapter.
controversie, inimicizie. "Controversies", "enmities": two words, two words (D128). The rubric and the conclusion say enmities; the opening and the question say controversies. The 1554 edition has contese for the first.
facevano, fece. "Made": fare is "make" throughout the chapter, of effects as of kings, empires and war, except where its object is a thing done (fare una delle due cose, "do one of the two things").
però. "Therefore" (D22).
se in Roma si poteva ordinare uno Stato. Stato is "state", as in I.2: a form of government, not the modern nation-state (glossary, [open]).
Gentiluomini, Popolani. "Gentlemen", "commoners": the Venetian names for those within the government and those outside it (D134). Popolani is "commoners", as in I.5 (D118).
Il qual modo lo dette il caso. "Which way chance gave": modo is "way" and via is "path" throughout (D131). Chance more than prudence ordered Venice; the same contrast as I.2, where Rome reaches its mixed state by accident.
sendosi ridotti in su quelli scogli. "Having withdrawn onto those rocks": the lagoon islands, settled, as I.1 says, by those fleeing the barbarian invasions ("the causes stated above").
un vivere politico. "A political living": the infinitive as a noun, as vivere libero is "free living". In .06 il vero vivere politico is "the true political living".
chiusono la via ..., di potere convenire ne' loro governi. "Closed the path ..., of being able to convene in their governments": the infinitive phrase depends on la via, displaced to the end. The English keeps it there. Convenire is "convene" both times.
fu fatto del governo. "Was made [part] of the government": admitted to it (D53).
comodità. "Convenience" (D59): the opportunity to make tumult.
li teneva in freno. "Held them in rein": the bridle image, as I.3 a freno, "reined in" (D88).
non sono stati molti, e di tanto numero. "Have not been many, or of such a number": both witnesses print e, "and", where the sense needs the negative carried on. English carries it with "or" (D129).
Sparta ..., potette mantenersi così lungo tempo; perché. The period's first ground is Sparta's few inhabitants and closed door and Lycurgus' laws, and a second, third and fourth perché explain the laws and their effect. The English keeps each perché attached to what it explains.
le leggi di Licurgo ..., le quali osservando, levavano via. "Observing which [they] removed": read with the Spartans as subject, who observe the laws and remove the causes of tumults; the Italian can also make the laws the subject of levavano. Levare via is "remove", kept apart from togliere via ("take away"), the rubric's verb (D131).
più egualità di sustanze, e meno egualità di grado. "More equality of substance and less equality of degree": more equal in wealth, less equal in rank. Grado is "degree", as in I.2 and I.5.
dettero mai loro desiderio d'averli. "Ever give them the desire to have them": the plebeians, the degrees.
Imperio. "Rule" (D124): the plebs, defended from injury, did not fear, and did not desire rule. un grande Imperio in .04–.05 is "a great empire": dominion over others.
forestieri. "Strangers" (D57).
a' legislatori di Roma era necessario fare una delle due cose. "It was necessary for the legislators of Rome to do one of the two things": the choices are not employing the plebs in war (Venice) and not admitting strangers (Sparta). E loro fecero l'una e l'altra: Rome did both of the things the remedies forbid, armed the plebs and admitted strangers, and so applied neither. The English keeps "the one and the other".
augumento. "Augmentation" (D69). The 1554 edition prints accrescimento, the noun of accrescere, "increase".
E se lo Stato romano veniva ad essere più quieto, ne seguiva .... "If the Roman state had come to be more quiet, this inconvenience would have followed": the imperfect indicative in a contrary-to-fact condition, as D47. Rome did not become quieter; the sentence says what would have followed if it had. In modo che ... levava ancora continues the counterfactual (D130).
inconveniente. "Inconvenience", in the older sense: a drawback that follows from a course (D133). Three times in .04, and the chapter's last word on the enmities: "an inconvenience necessary to arrive at the Roman greatness".
ampliare, crescere. "Expand", "grow": two verbs, two words (D132). Non crescere il numero dei cittadini suoi is "not grow the number of its citizens", the verb used transitively.
Pertanto. "On that account" (D98).
maneggiare. "Handle": to manage, as a horse or a weapon.
sì vile. "So base": abject, without spirit.
E però in ogni nostra deliberazione si debbe. "And therefore in every deliberation of ours one must": però (D22); debbe "must" (D120).
tutto netto, tutto senza sospetto. "[A thing] wholly clean, wholly without suspicion": the Italian has no noun.
il Re a vita, e il picciolo numero del Senato. "The king for life, and the small number of the senate": Sparta's two institutions. Rome could have copied them, but not the small citizen body that let them unite the city, so the copy would have availed little.
arebbe a esaminare. "He would be to examine" (D61).
il veleno di simili Repubbliche. "The poison of like republics": simile is "like" (glossary); tali acquisti in the same period is "such acquisitions".
la ribellione di Tebe, causata da Pelopida. Thebes, garrisoned by Sparta since 382 BC, was freed by Pelopidas and others in 379; Sparta's defeat at Leuctra in 371 followed. Machiavelli compresses the sequence into "a very slight accident".
Vinegia ... perdette in una giornata ogni cosa. "Lost everything in one battle": Agnadello, 14 May 1509, against the French army of the League of Cambrai. Giornata is "battle" (D49). Industria is "industry", skill and diligence; the 1554 edition prints astutia, cunning.
Crederei bene. "I would well believe": his judgment, in the conditional, of an ideal he is about to withdraw.
subito opprimere. "Oppress it at once": take it at a stroke.
come io la presuppongo. "As I presuppose it": presupporre is the founder's working assumption (D82).
rade volte. "Seldom" (D97).
non occorrerà mai. "It will never occur" (D01).
per paura di sé. "For fear for himself": out of fear on his own account.
constituzione o legge. "Constitution or law": a fundamental ordinance. The 1554 edition prints ordine.
conviene che le saglino, o che le scendano. "It is fitting that they rise or that they descend": conviene, impersonal, is "it is fitting" (D85).
a molte cose che la ragione non t'induce, t'induce la necessità. "To many things to which reason does not induce you, necessity induces you": the verb repeated, as in the Italian. The 1554 edition has ti astringe, "constrains you", for the second.
avendo ordinata ... e la necessità la conducesse. "Having ordered ..., and necessity should lead it": the period changes construction midway, from a gerund to a conditional subjunctive. The English keeps the break.
quando il cielo le fusse sì benigno. "When heaven should be so benign to it": quando with the subjunctive, conditional.
l'ozio. "Idleness", as in I.1, where it is good for Venice and a vice elsewhere.
questa via del mezzo / un modo mezzo. "This middle path" / "a middle way": two phrases, kept apart (D131).
bisogna. "It is required": the edition's rendering of the impersonal bisognare, in every tense (D260); the reasons are in the note on bisogni at Machiavelli I.2.
quelle inimicizie ..., tollerarle. "Those enmities ..., to tolerate them": the infinitive depends on credo che sia necessario, and the object is set before it and resumed by the pronoun. The 1554 edition supplies si deurebbe, "one should".
l'autorità tribunizia. "The tribunician authority": the argument of I.4 and I.5, where the tribunes are the guard of liberty.
facilmente. "Readily" (glossary).
l'autorità dello accusare. "The authority of accusing": the subject of I.7.
Se in Roma si poteva ordinare uno Stato che togliesse via le inimicizie intra il popolo ed il senato
Whether in Rome a state could be ordered that should take away the enmities between the people and the senate Canestrini sets Machiavelli's chapter title over the reply, with intra for the 1824 tra, lower-case popolo and senato, ed il for e il, and without a full stop.
Argument. He grants the premise and moves the cause. It is true that a Rome which used its plebs in war, having too few patricians to fight alone, had to keep them content Machiavelli .04. But what made the tumults was the patricians' refusal: they neither admitted the plebs to the government nor stopped injuring them, seizing the public land, very harsh in exacting debts, and, one can believe, bending justice in every other matter. Then two counterfactuals. Had there been no distinction of orders at the beginning of liberty, or had the honours been shared from the start, as they were later of necessity, there would have been no such tumults; and they did cease once the government was shared, until the Gracchi, when a corrupt city divided anew, poor against rich, with ennobled plebeians among the rich. And had the patricians, without handing the government over, set some order against the injuries and opened a path into the patriciate for the leading plebeians, perhaps there would have been none either: the Sextian laws show the plebs would have taken relief and left the honours, had not its leaders, who wanted office and had no other way to it, tied the two together. His conclusion is not "I do not readily concur" but "I do not see" that it was impossible; he judges it very easy. And since it could be done, the defects that kept the city in tumult and created the tribunes are not to be praised, and the tribunes, once the city was at peace, were rather damaging than useful.
History. The ager publicus, land taken in conquest, was largely occupied by the rich; debt bondage (nexum) was the plebs' other grievance. Livy (6.35–42) narrates the ten-year agitation of the tribunes Gaius Licinius and Lucius Sextius, which ended in 367 BC with laws on debt, on holdings of public land and on the consulship, one consul to be plebeian. Livy's tribunes refused to let the first two be voted without the third (6.39), which is Guicciardini's "excluded the plebs from hope of being able to obtain the one without the other". He gives Sextius the praenomen Publius. The plebs was admitted to the consulship in 366, to the dictatorship in 356, the censorship in 351, the praetorship in 337, the priestly colleges in 300; the conflict of the orders is usually dated to end with the lex Hortensia of 287 BC.
Cross-reference. "As is said in the fourth Discourse": Machiavelli's I.4 (I.4 .01), and Guicciardini's own reply to it, where he had already put the cause of the disunion in the plebs' exclusion from the honours (his I.4 .01). The tribunes "rather damaging than useful" answer Machiavelli's closing praise of the tribunician authority Machiavelli .07, and continue his reply to I.5, where he denied that the tribunes were the particular guard of liberty (his I.5 .01).
Established from Canestrini 1857, Opere inedite vol. 1, pp. 1–65 (WIT-FG-CONS-1857-CANESTRINI) — the editio princeps, which governs. Collated against Palmarocchi 1933 (WIT-FG-CONS-1933-PALMAROCCHI): page images and the Wikisource transcription consulted as collation evidence, not reproduced (LICENSE §5).
tutta la autorità Ma dico → tutta la autorità. Ma dico (FG-CONS.1.6.01). No stop in the impression; a capital follows; the 1933 edition prints it. D67.
la plebe , o, come → la plebe; o, come (FG-CONS.1.6.01). A spaced mark both readers see and neither can weigh; the 1933 edition prints a semicolon. D110.
non si curava , se non che → non si curava; se non che (FG-CONS.1.6.01). As C002. D110.
sanza [comunicare]. The 1857 witness reads sanza conciare interamente il governo alla plebe. The 1933 witness reads sanza communicare interamente el governo alla plebe. Canestrini prints conciare, 'fitting' or 'dressing', which barely construes. The 1933 communicare is the verb the reply has already used twice of the honours and the government, and cōicare, its abbreviation, is easily misread as conciare. Emended (D126).
a' beni occupati, e degli onori (the e damaged, printed round) — 1857. The 1933 witness reads ed a' beni occupati, e degli onori. The letter prints like o; read as e on sense and on the 1933 edition (D127).
si vede per esperienza — 1857. The 1933 witness reads si vedde per esperienzia. Present against past: 'one sees by experience' against 'one saw'.
il governo fu comunicato insino al tempo de' Gracchi, ne' quali — 1857. The 1933 witness reads el governo fu communicato, insino al tempo de' Gracchi; ne' quali. Same sense: the tumults ceased once the government was shared, and stayed ceased until the Gracchi. The 1933 pointing attaches insino to cessorono explicitly.
Orthography, capitalization, word division and punctuation follow the governing witness throughout; no reading is hybridized between witnesses.
The paragraph. Canestrini prints the reply as one paragraph, and it is kept.
Io credo essere vero. "I believe it to be true": assent (credo), to the premise only. What follows moves the cause.
che volendo e' Romani ... che era necessario. "That the Romans wishing ..., that it was necessary": the che is repeated after the long gerund clause, as Guicciardini repeats it after each of his two counterfactuals. The English keeps all three (D136).
necessitati. "Necessitated", as in I.5: compelled.
le armi proprie. "Their own arms": a citizen soldiery, not hired troops.
il non volere fare questo e' patrizii. "The patricians' not wishing to do this": the nominal infinitive with its subject after it, as in I.4 (D109).
parteciparne. "Partake of it": of the government (glossary, partecipare di).
le possessioni publiche. "The public possessions": the ager publicus, public land held and worked by the rich. Below, a' beni occupati is "the goods occupied": two words, two words (D139).
come è detto nel quarto Discorso. "As is said in the fourth Discourse": Machiavelli's I.4, on the disunion of plebs and senate. Discorso with a capital is Machiavelli's chapter, as in his reply to I.3 (si dice nel Discorso). His own reply to I.4 put the cause of the disunion where he puts it here, in the shutting of the plebs out of the honours.
comunicati gli onori, il governo fu comunicato, [comunicare]. "Communicated", three times: shared. The third is an emendation: Canestrini prints conciare, the 1933 edition communicare (D126).
insino al tempo de' Gracchi. "Up to the time of the Gracchi", as Machiavelli's in fino al tempo de' Gracchi (.01). The comma before it is the English's, so that "up to" attaches to "ceased" (D137).
ne' quali. "In whose [time]": the plural takes the Gracchi.
umori. "Humours", as in Machiavelli I.4.
la gente bassa. "The low people": the poor, against the rich, among whom were plebeian families ennobled by office.
porre qualche buono ordine alle ingiurie. "Set some good order to the injuries": porre is "set" (D115).
plebei principali. "Principal plebeians": the leading plebeian families.
forse. "Perhaps": on the second counterfactual only.
Publio Sestio. "Publius Sextius": Livy's Lucius Sextius, tribune with Gaius Licinius Stolo, whose laws (367 BC) eased debts, limited holdings of public land and opened the consulship to plebeians. Guicciardini's point is Livy's (6.39): the plebs would have taken the relief and left the office, and the tribunes would not let the laws be voted apart. The name is kept as printed.
appetivano. "Had appetite for": the verb of appetito (D117).
conseguire l'uno sanza l'altro. "Obtain the one without the other": relief without office.
Non veggo adunque. "I do not see, then": not non concorro, "I do not concur", but a flat denial of the impossibility Machiavelli argued.
non avessino a essere. "There were not to be" (D61).
anzi lo giudico molto facile. "On the contrary I judge it very easy": anzi reverses, and the reversal is his judgment (giudico). Kept apart from più presto, "rather", in the last line (D135).
defetti. "Defects" (glossary, difetto): Canestrini's spelling.
stessi piena. "Stayed full": stare.
tante autorità. "So many authorities": the tribunes' several powers, as in his reply to I.3 (D138).
dannoso. "Damaging" (D106).
No full stop. Canestrini prints none after utile; the 1933 edition does. The English ends as the Italian does (D40).